Aankhein abhi bhi nam hain,
Manzilein hain kareeb phir bhi thoda gam hai.
Khinchi hui hain lakeerein peshani ki,
Kho gayi hai kahin chah kucch paane ki.
Gum hai muskaan door kisi kone mein,
Zinda hai umeed kho ke khush hone mein.
Umang hai, ehsaas nahin,
Sarovar hai par pyaas nahin.
Shuruwaat hai, buniyaad nahin,
Kahaani ye kaisi antt jhalkaati nahin.
Nasha sharaab mein hota to naachti bottal.
Khushi sacchai mein hoti to jagmagaati hakeekat.
Naa raasta, naa manzil, naa chah, naa sacchai,
Chal chale hain kiss raah par,
Har mod pe toofan,
Har mod pe khaai.
Dost, Urdu aur Hindi ko badi khubsurati se prastut kia hai….umang with ehsaas, sarovar with pyaas, i dont know if it intentional or just for convenience i think or may be an experiment but it clicks right plus its new of its kind and thats what always matters !! (Y)
“Nasha sharaab mein hota to naachti bottal, mai-kade jhoomte paimano mein hoti halchal…….” but i must say “Khushi sacchai mein hoti to jagmagaati hakeekat” completes the famous sher and could be appended to make a ghazal out of it but don’t mind…… thoda halka hai boss !!
“Naa raasta, naa manzil, naa chah, naa sacchai,
Chal chale hain kiss raah par,
Har mod pe toofan,
Har mod pe khaai”.
competes well with Sahir Ludhianvii’s lines like ” Na koi rah, na manzil, na roshni ka suraag, bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri. Inhi andhero mein rah jaonga khokar kabhii”.
ALL in ALL , i enjoyed it and gave the honest review and i recommend it, its short and sweet :like:
Khushi sacchai mein hoti to jagmagaati hakeekat ………..sahi (Y)